Bumble Bee

beesunflower You remind me of the pollen.
You camouflage with
the petals of a sunflower.

Each one of your lines
under a magnifying lens make
me wanna

be a person like you

Bryan, sixth grade, Dobie Middle School

Amy Russell March 12, 2009 at 9:33 am #

Fantastic poem–fantastic writer! I’m so impressed with Bryan’s ability to capture an image and say something new about it.

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MERYORI September 29, 2009 at 9:31 am #

NICE POEM BRYAN…

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Tania September 29, 2009 at 9:31 am #

I like you poem it’s pretty cool it reminds me of spring and my birthday.

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Tania September 29, 2009 at 9:32 am #

I like your poem It reminds me of spring

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ricardo September 29, 2009 at 9:34 am #

awesome poem dude , great creativity

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