Bumble Bee

9 Mar

beesunflowerYou remind me of the pollen.
You camouflage with
the petals of a sunflower.

Each one of your lines
under a magnifying lens make
me wanna

be a person like you

Bryan, sixth grade, Dobie Middle School

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5 Responses to “Bumble Bee”

  1. Amy Russell March 12, 2009 at 9:33 am #

    Fantastic poem–fantastic writer! I’m so impressed with Bryan’s ability to capture an image and say something new about it.

  2. MERYORI September 29, 2009 at 9:31 am #

    NICE POEM BRYAN…

  3. Tania September 29, 2009 at 9:31 am #

    I like you poem it’s pretty cool it reminds me of spring and my birthday.

  4. Tania September 29, 2009 at 9:32 am #

    I like your poem It reminds me of spring

  5. ricardo September 29, 2009 at 9:34 am #

    awesome poem dude , great creativity

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