Bumble Bee

beesunflowerYou remind me of the pollen.
You camouflage with
the petals of a sunflower.

Each one of your lines
under a magnifying lens make
me wanna

be a person like you

Bryan, sixth grade, Dobie Middle School


5 thoughts on “Bumble Bee

  1. Fantastic poem–fantastic writer! I’m so impressed with Bryan’s ability to capture an image and say something new about it.

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