Inventing New Landscapes

7 Aug

Meet Gabriella, one of the amazing teens to attend our Teen Writing Lab at the Austin Public Library this summer. Gabriella’s short story was inspired by a lesson that explored the idea of place and invited teens to imagine their own cities, consider the rules that keep them running, and describe what makes each city unique. Seeking inspiration, Gabriella says she glanced outside the library windows and was momentarily blinded by the sun reflecting off a car window. This is when her idea for the city of Nomalli was born!

The City That Casts No Shadow

If you were to visit Nomalli, you would at once be astounded by the light. No brightness could ever compare to the glowing white city. You must wear special glasses or else fry your eyes to a crisp.

Everywhere you look, the tall, blazing buildings’ graceful yet forbearing gaze look down upon you, as if judging your every move. Strange floating discs pass by, transporting the fluorescent citizens about their business. The people are friendly once spoken to, but stare right through you, as if gazing at some faraway point of interest.

When walking in the streets, all is quiet except for the conversations of nearby people and high-pitched squeaking sounds that can only be heard when listening closely.

The road leading away from the shadowless city fades in brightness until street lamps must again be used. Night never comes in the city, only a slight dimming of the light. If only the beauty of Nomalli could be enjoyed by all, for the people of the city are blind.

Gabriella Erb
Grade 8, Austin Waldorf School

 

 

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